I am always proud of the creativity that is shown by the student writer of the week. This time is no different. However, I could tell that Mikel spent some time going over this piece and making sure that spelling and grammar were correct as well. Thank you Mikel for your positively powerful punctuation!
The Nightmare
What kind of world are we in! Wait let me start at the beginning. It was Saturday and my brother came home from a tiring Saturday detention so I let him lay on the black leather couch. We had fallen asleeep and woke up in a dark world. Then we saw Freddy Krueger and then there was many serial killers like Jason and Billy. There was a green whirlpool so me and my brother jumped in. When we woke up Jeepers Creepers gripped our arms and Jason sharpened his machette. "Is this the end?" my brother asked. "I don't know." I said
To be continued...
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