Student Writing of the Week 1-20-12

This week's writing shows how a story should have a beginning, a middle, and an end.  Anish's story shows the characters changing at the end of the story!  Don't forget to turn in any corrections to Mrs. Asterman at school or post them in the comments below for extra credit!

A play by Anish

Mario: Hey luigi You want to have a race?
Luigi: Sure

Narrator: It took a long time finally they finished.  Mario had won.

Mario: Good race.

Luigi: Thanks!

Mario: I"ll help you so on your turns let's practice.

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One year later

Mario and luigi raced again, this this time luigi won.  Mario was proud of luigi.


Good luck on your writing submission for next week.  Create a draft, have a fellow student edit and revise it, then turn in your final draft.  :)