Monday, January 9, 2012

Student Writing of the Week

Every week, I will post some writing from our 4th grade class that students have taken through the writing process and submitted for publishing.  Only one student can be featured!  Please enjoy our first winner's work.



A play by Francheska

Francheska: Mom, what are you doing?
Mom: I am cooking
Francheska: What are you cooking?
Mom: Ice cream with syrup
Francheska: Why?
Mom: Because I want to try something different.
Francheska: Ok, can I try some?
Mom: Sure.
Francheska: (takes a bite) Hey, that actually tastes good.  Thank you!
Mom: No problem.  See, if you try new things, you might like it.
Francheska: Thanks.
(they both hug)

1 comment:

  1. Ice cream with syrup is "Ice cream with syrup."
    and you forgot to put quotation marks on every sentence.

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