Tuesday, January 31, 2012

Student Writing of the Week 1-30-12

Talk about getting creative!  Students can drop any kind of writing in the publishing portal.  Plays, poems, letters, biographies, fantasys, and research reports are all options.  Dominic really thought outside of the box and turned in a TV show script!  Enjoy!

1,000 WAYS TO DIE ON HALO
by Dominic


Narrator:     Warning!  The people in this show's name's have been changed.  Don't etempt the the things you are about to see... or you will DIE.
                   Tonight on 1,000 ways to die on halo, a guy who didn't see the end of the cliff had ended up in the sea, Someone didn't look both ways and got hit, and death. 
                   June 14, 2525     10:30AM.  Spartan 1337 wasn't the brighteswt solder in the UNSC so he got in a lot of fight's and one was with sgt. Jones because he called him a loser and when he was backing up and he didn't see the edge and fell 10ft.

Dr. Cortez: At a 10ft drop he would have a major head injury, about 3 broken ribs, and a broken arm and leg.

Narrator: toon in nextime for 1,000 way to die on Halo also follow us on facebook and twitter
Posted by at

2 comments:

  1. Michael GarlowFebruary 6, 2012 at 4:25 PM

    toon in the last narrator sentence, needs caps.
    nextime also in the same sentence, is spaced, next time
    brighteswt, you probably just miss typed when posting.
    halo, after the first paragraph, needs caps
    10:30AM, on the third paragraph, need a space before A.M and A.M needs the dot.
    sgt. Jones third paragraph, second sentence, Sgt. needs caps
    This is all I saw, thanks! Michael

    ReplyDelete
  2. AnonymousFebruary 15, 2012 at 6:04 PM

    spelling mistakes: corrections:
    etempt attempt
    Brighteswt brightest

    ReplyDelete

Subscribe to: Post Comments (Atom)